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proximoception ([personal profile] proximoception) wrote2008-12-09 02:31 pm

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I'll be returning to it shortly for paper #2, but it's been nice going over The Auroras of Autumn time and time again, rubbing out the opacities, connecting in all the stray details, getting the whole structure into my head at once, like I did with Trumph a few years ago, and a bit like reading Adonais line by line to Julie after Rome and explaining everything. With the Bishop poems, too. It's the rarest privilege when the more closely you approach something the more it gives you. Term paper writing is often intolerable, but I always love the slow, thorough rereading, while telling myself it doesn't count as procrastinating.

[identity profile] grashupfer.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
and a bit like reading Adonais line by line to Julie after Rome

This is suggestive enough as a sentence, but I'd love to read this short story...

[identity profile] nightspore.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 04:39 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah -- for me it was: Upstairs the windows will be lighted, not the rooms. The necklace is a carving, not a kiss. The warm (!) hands are a motion, not a touch. Especially The necklace is a carving, not a kiss.

reading paragraphs / On the sublime

[identity profile] thelican.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 01:50 pm (UTC)(link)
it's the rarest privilege when the more closely you approach something the more it gives you.

Well put.