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proximoception) wrote2010-12-04 11:18 pm
proximoception) wrote2010-12-04 11:18 pm
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Twelve books to read, a paper to write for an unfinished class, then applications. And whatever Christmas entails. And domestic bliss to hold my end of up.
Short book suggestions welcome. I might finish Don Juan? When I read it it infects me. Started an ottava rima journal this last time, managed seven stanzas before everything stopped for Apocalypse Move:
These very words inaugurate my journal.
You, reader, read what I, the writer, wrote,
And what I write, you read, may prove eternal,
Though all futurity should take no note,
By replication kept forever vernal
On numberless machines our kids devote
To storing up lost, unsought pasts of data -
Just in case some need should come up later.
My stanza, you'll have guessed, 's ottava rima,
Made popular in Early Modern Italy,
Which English poets later came to deem a
Not unfit form for verse. Bigly or littlely,
For epic or for fun, that is, a theme o'
Love or sober thought, drummy or fiddle-y,
The stanza flexed to fit most any function,
And so I dust it off without compunction.
Yeats used it well, and Browning too - Keats poorly,
To riff on old Boccaccio, the rapscallion.
Shelley used it beautifully and surely,
Wordsworth just to translate from Italian
Some bits of Ariosto's poem. Less purely,
In German, Goethe told of how his stallion
Drooped pining for his mare - whilome so fiery,
Though fetching fillies neighed nigh - in his Diary.
You'd think that it was that inspired Byron,
The (Anglo) top practitioner of the form,
But there's no sign it entered his environ -
For export Goethe's poem was...rather warm.
It took a poem by Frere to heat the iron
And make in that Lord's head the octaves swarm.
Stendhal, though, claims a Roman, name of Monte,
Wrote poems like Beppo, Byron's first racconte.
But be that as it may, it doesn't ruin
His absolute achievement in the vein:
The sixteen-point-two canto tome Don Juan,
To criticize which I would deem insane.
The horse of art he broke with that's a new one,
Which, though no flier, flashed across the plain
With speed and grace and dazzle heretofore
Unknown in verse - known oft (confess!) to bore.
Lord Byron was a master entertainer,
But something always kept his genius muted
Until she kicked off all that would restrain her
(Imagine what yours might be like if you did!).
The eight-line stanza freed a larger, saner,
Relaxed, though rapid, strain, which fully suited
The Man inside - until then, who much better
Than in his poems was seen in any letter.
Sleepiness is weighing on my rhyming,
And though imagination's freed by sleep
In dreams, before we dream we lose our timing,
Vocabularic reach, and sense to keep
Our purpose straight. When in the state that I'm in,
One's stanza melts and sinks into the deep
Of its own liquid foundering. And so,
To you: adieu! Me too. To bed I go.
It's hard to know what to do with ottava rima past describing ottava rima.
[Turns out this was my 1000th entry.]
Short book suggestions welcome. I might finish Don Juan? When I read it it infects me. Started an ottava rima journal this last time, managed seven stanzas before everything stopped for Apocalypse Move:
These very words inaugurate my journal.
You, reader, read what I, the writer, wrote,
And what I write, you read, may prove eternal,
Though all futurity should take no note,
By replication kept forever vernal
On numberless machines our kids devote
To storing up lost, unsought pasts of data -
Just in case some need should come up later.
My stanza, you'll have guessed, 's ottava rima,
Made popular in Early Modern Italy,
Which English poets later came to deem a
Not unfit form for verse. Bigly or littlely,
For epic or for fun, that is, a theme o'
Love or sober thought, drummy or fiddle-y,
The stanza flexed to fit most any function,
And so I dust it off without compunction.
Yeats used it well, and Browning too - Keats poorly,
To riff on old Boccaccio, the rapscallion.
Shelley used it beautifully and surely,
Wordsworth just to translate from Italian
Some bits of Ariosto's poem. Less purely,
In German, Goethe told of how his stallion
Drooped pining for his mare - whilome so fiery,
Though fetching fillies neighed nigh - in his Diary.
You'd think that it was that inspired Byron,
The (Anglo) top practitioner of the form,
But there's no sign it entered his environ -
For export Goethe's poem was...rather warm.
It took a poem by Frere to heat the iron
And make in that Lord's head the octaves swarm.
Stendhal, though, claims a Roman, name of Monte,
Wrote poems like Beppo, Byron's first racconte.
But be that as it may, it doesn't ruin
His absolute achievement in the vein:
The sixteen-point-two canto tome Don Juan,
To criticize which I would deem insane.
The horse of art he broke with that's a new one,
Which, though no flier, flashed across the plain
With speed and grace and dazzle heretofore
Unknown in verse - known oft (confess!) to bore.
Lord Byron was a master entertainer,
But something always kept his genius muted
Until she kicked off all that would restrain her
(Imagine what yours might be like if you did!).
The eight-line stanza freed a larger, saner,
Relaxed, though rapid, strain, which fully suited
The Man inside - until then, who much better
Than in his poems was seen in any letter.
Sleepiness is weighing on my rhyming,
And though imagination's freed by sleep
In dreams, before we dream we lose our timing,
Vocabularic reach, and sense to keep
Our purpose straight. When in the state that I'm in,
One's stanza melts and sinks into the deep
Of its own liquid foundering. And so,
To you: adieu! Me too. To bed I go.
It's hard to know what to do with ottava rima past describing ottava rima.
[Turns out this was my 1000th entry.]
A stanza on pronunciation
The way you did, and Byron did: not "Juan."
I've taught a lot of students, never knew one
Who didn't first assume it rhymed with "John."
"The Spanish name, the English rhyme?" Eschew one,
And trust the rhyme which follows hard upon.
Some think demanding English rhymes despotic,
But I'd pronounce this quest to rhyme "quixotic."
no subject
Since no one's hardly heard of him or his.
Or is it nearby Mexico what done it?
Spanish it was once that Spanish is
Again. Moliere's "Don Zhuan"? Pah, we shun it.
And Mozart's just heard in the opera biz.
How'd I know Byron's? Here is how it's done:
You read the first six lines of Stanza One.
The history of mispronunciation
Is quite a lot of histories at once.
I just don't want (within core education)
This made much of - nobody is a dunce
Because they don't know all the ways their nation
Fucked up what now we fuck up different. Hunts
For keeping foreign foreign scamper on...
Since in the end it's actually "Dohn Khwannn."