That last rhyme really works; so do the modulations of rhyme; so does seizing when blazing seems better till I see that you use blaze in the next line and then retroactively see why seizing; so does "not not have this." Are these improvised or how long do they take? I really like them.
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Date: 2012-05-10 11:23 am (UTC)