I think this took about an hour and then a second hour making a dozen small changes, as usual. It's unimprovised in the sense that it all means something I want it to, improvised in that I knew only some of what it would mean while starting - as usual too.
I did hesitate over "blazing" but that's a kind of near rhyme only Dickinson finds ways to pull off, maybe sometimes Owen.
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Date: 2012-05-10 07:26 pm (UTC)I think this took about an hour and then a second hour making a dozen small changes, as usual. It's unimprovised in the sense that it all means something I want it to, improvised in that I knew only some of what it would mean while starting - as usual too.
I did hesitate over "blazing" but that's a kind of near rhyme only Dickinson finds ways to pull off, maybe sometimes Owen.