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proximoception ([personal profile] proximoception) wrote2012-12-06 11:41 pm

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Since our thoughts move it the world is a mental world.

Since our thoughts move it very little outside our own perception the world is a very little mental world.

Since our thoughts move it very much within our perception the world is a very much mental world.

The world regarded itself in confusion.

The world replied but I am a physical world.

The world then insisted and since you are a part of me all of your thoughts are just physical.

The world relaxed into endless smugness and rain.

But we were in another world and paid not a whit's attention.

Also we stomped our names across its muddy, mindless face.

[identity profile] toctoc.livejournal.com 2012-12-07 12:33 pm (UTC)(link)
O, this one's very good.

A bit Bronkish, even!

[identity profile] proximoception.livejournal.com 2012-12-07 12:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Any Bronkmanship displayed is owed to you. My ignorance of most post-Bishop poets is profound.

[identity profile] toctoc.livejournal.com 2012-12-07 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
They're just about contemporaries!

I do like what I've read of him very much--he speaks to a number of my current preoccupations--so happy if you've been even minorly swayed by my Bronkvangelization.

Keep writing these, please.