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proximoception ([personal profile] proximoception) wrote2014-08-04 12:11 pm

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How things will be a minute from now is hidden in things as they are.

The invisible is finally about the controls to the future.

When we've found some we stay with them.

Because they can't come with us.

Or those that can we forget.

For not being problems.

[identity profile] ensenchiridion.livejournal.com 2014-08-04 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this. It also reminds me, some, of Koch's One Train May Hide Another.

[identity profile] proximoception.livejournal.com 2014-08-06 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
Hadn't known that poem. I think the best bit in it might be "and then a lot of lilacs."

Whole thing leaves one uneasy, as though another poem were behind it. Not necessarily one Koch knew how to write.