Date: 2015-08-30 04:47 pm (UTC)
No - I'm not sure it doesn't work. It's rhythm is Audenesque, maybe, and it always takes me a while to assimilate the rhythms of an Auden poem. I can see where it would grow on me. I'll let it percolate a while.
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